One on one feedback with Caroline Cample as my 'buddy' - Make your desired audience more specific. - Regarding autoethnographic process, describe what it felt like in yourself prior to the exercise, make a comparison. - Why did you choose this specific martial art? Gives details of motivation - Use the benefits you've received from the martial art as leverage - Narrow down your design statement, be simple and honest. Don't just use generic words like 'disrupt'. What do you mean by this? You're combining your interests - How does your illustration fit into this? How can you persuade using this medium? - Illustration is a very broad practice, be more specific Feedback from group critique - Gamify the AR aspect, makes people get out and walk around to collect the animations like Pokemon Go - Body image as an incentive for many, convince someone to squat while they're waiting at the bus stop - Deliberately move away from body image as a motive,...
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